Expanding Understanding of Musical Forms Through Scholarly Writing — Brad Osborn (2016)
A music history professor redesigns an upper-level musical composition class required for undergraduate music majors to include more written assignments in order to build a vocabulary for musical form and works.
MTHC 410: Tonal Forms functions as an upper-level undergraduate class offered only to music majors who have completed four semesters of required music theory courses. Offered only in the Fall semester, this class typically has an enrollment of 10-15 students. The class addresses formal structures used in instrumental compositions of the 18th and 19th centuries. One of the goals of the course is that students gain a vocabulary that allows them to describe and understand forms, both as a set of family resemblances among a similar set of musical works and also as a process unto itself. The purpose of the course redesign is deepen students’ ability to express what they know about musical form in written scholarly prose through restructured assignments and feedback.
To accomplish the goal of the redesign, I began by implementing a new writing assignment in F2014. Although students demonstrated admirable musical acuity in their analysis, they were unable to consistently portray that acuity in their prose. Taking that information, I implemented two new review processes in F2015. First, before any drafts were due, I had students work through a “grade norming” activity. Second, instead of providing written feedback on student work, I recorded a 3-5 minute audio critique of the paper. Last, I reduced the number of writing assignments by removing two and adding a new analysis assignment. This allowed students to focus more fully on the assignments and feedback given. I also added a multi-parameter rubric for the assignment, so that students knew the different categories for which they would be assessed.
Overall, I found there were too many variables to assess how any one change really affected the outcome. I anticipated that my writing pedagogy, particularly my new feedback mechanisms, would result in student improvement. Comparing semester-long grade distributions between F2014 and F2015 shows that implementation of writing pedagogy did improve individual student scores. However, the newly introduced analysis assignment seemed to reverse any improvement. My initial assignment in this decline is that though students did continue to improve as writers, the last paper was substantially more difficult in analytical scope than either assignment one or two. The F2016 iteration focused on refining the multitude of changes made between F2014 and F2015, such as the implementation of assignment three, increased attention to scaffolding, and the introduction of the multi-parameter rubric.
As the result of changes made in the redesign, I believe that students have a clearer idea of what constitutes good writing and craft better arguments in their writing. I attribute this both to the norm grading activity, as well as the straight-forward rubric presented. The original impetus of focusing on writing in this redesign (teaching, instead of expecting) was as a result of a noticed shift in students’ ability to express themselves through writing. I realize that this same process of “teaching, rather than expecting” still needs to be applied more specifically to the process of forming sound arguments. Future assignments will include a focus on argumentative scholarly writing.
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A. Course Description
The course I have chosen to redesign for CHRP is Tonal Forms (MTHC 410) [pdf]—an upper-level undergraduate course offered each fall, taken only by music majors, and only after they have completed all four semesters of the core music theory sequence. It is required for all music majors except for those on the MEMT (education and therapy) track. Typically, sections enroll 10 to 15 students. The course addresses the formal structures used in instrumental compositions of the 18th and 19th centuries by Haydn, Mozart, and Beethoven. Starting with the shortest forms, like the eight-measure units used in the opening theme of a piano sonata, we slowly work our way up to analyzing progressively longer units, culminating with the entire first movement of a string quartet, symphony, or concerto. By the end of the semester, I want students to gain a vocabulary that allows them to describe elements of musical form and to understand form both as a set of family resemblances among a set of similar musical works, as well as an aesthetic process unto itself.
B. Student Goals
- Writing Across the Curriculum: students will learn how to express what they know about musical form in written scholarly prose
- Standard Written English: students will gain mastery in the written dialect of academia
- Self- and Peer-Assessment: students will be able to assess what constitutes various levels of writing efficacy, and will be able to self-assess their own work.
- Revision and Improvement: Students will revise to improve between first and second drafts of individual papers, and will improve from one paper to the next.
I should explain why I spend so much time thinking about writing in a music class. First, the students who take this course are the most musically advanced of our undergraduate population in the School of Music. While we enroll students interested in all aspects of the musical universe—those interested in teaching middle school band, those interested in therapeutic uses of music—the only students who take 410 are those pursuing degrees in the composition and performance of music. In the four years of teaching this class, I have run into very little trouble with student comprehension of the material.
Second, it strikes me that all of us in higher education are interested in having students write well. But this is something that most of us expect, something that we assume we do not need to spend class time teaching. This “pass-the-buck” approach to expecting-not-teaching writing does not seem to be working. Informally, I have seen student writing skills (as well as reading comprehension) diminish over the past decade. While I am certainly not qualified to speculate on the causes of this problem, I have decided to carve out time in my curriculum devoted to improving it. This not only speaks to teaching writing across the curriculum, but also, since I’m teaching them specifically to write about music, to writing in the discipline (WID).
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I implemented my new writing assignments in Fall 2014.The assignment descriptions can be downloaded here. The rubric on the final page of these descriptions will be discussed in the section under “Student Work.”
Students in this first year demonstrated admirable musical acuity in the analysis portion of these assignments, but that acuity was met with inconsistent success in conveying their thoughts in prose. Many students, for example, created compelling diagrams demonstrating their grasp of the shape of a Mozart piano concerto. Yet, when they tried to put this into words, they resorted to a blow-by-blow description of the musical events in the order in which they happened. Few students were able to understand that a more compelling account of these events might focus on a few interesting passages that may defy expectations, and concisely shape a captivating account of how Mozart’s alterations to these expectations create surprise.
Since I knew in Fall 2014 that 410 was to be my target course for CHRP, I had the foresight to collect as many samples of student writing assignments as possible with an aim toward redesigning the prompts to improve student performance. I was able to collect all papers from about six or seven students at all levels of achievement. I then used these as a baseline indicator when comparing them to the papers I received in Fall 2015. In Fall 2015, I used Blackboard to collect all papers from every student. My additional goal in Fall 2015 was not only to track student improvement from Fall 2014 to Fall 2015, but also to track individual student performance in the three papers over the course of the semester.
In Fall 2015, I implemented two new review processes that I’ve learned in part from my collaboration in CHRP. Before any of the first drafts were due, we spent a class period going through a “grade norming” game. I put the students in teams of three, and each team was given the same paper from Fall 2014 (author name omitted, of course). Using the same rubric that they would be graded on for their own papers, the students each graded the paper individually, then had ten minutes to discuss the grade they gave the paper with the other members of their team. The team had to agree on a single grade for the paper. The team that came the closest to the actual grade I gave in Fall 2014 won. I repeated this for two other papers. The three papers ranged from an A to a D, and students had no problem getting within one letter grade of the actual grade I gave. The theory behind this activity was that students would have hands-on experience with what would constitute an A grade, a B grade, and so on, for their own papers later in the semester.
Students then repeated this activity, but this time the three papers were the three team members’ first drafts of the writing assignment. Using a similar process, team members gave each others’ papers a grade, then discussed that grade and suggested room for improvement. The final draft was then due a week later.
Rather than marking up the paper copy in pen, or providing electronic written feedback on a document, I tried a new feedback system in which I recorded a three to five-minute audio track where I critiqued the paper. An example of this can be heard, and is discussed, in the Student Work section. My goals for moving toward this audio feedback were twofold. First, the audio format allowed me to speak out loud phrases that sounded awkward and suggest, in real time, room for improvement. Second, freed from the time and space constraints of paper and ink, I could provide more positive feedback to encourage good writing habits the students are already exhibiting.
Essentially, this mimics an in-office meeting about students’ papers, but it has the added benefit that students can revisit my comments in preparation for their subsequent papers. To ensure that they did so, I graded a one-to-two paragraph written description of the things I outlined in this audio feedback that they would specifically improve on the next writing assignment (moving forward I may have them actually record this as an audio track and share it with me to preserve the medium). This last component is what I hoped would ensure upticks in individual student performance over the course of the semester.
In F2015 I also revised the writing assignments themselves, and reduced the number from 4 to 3. I then added a new third assignment that asked students to analyze a very strange sonata form from Haydn, several portions of which we had analyzed in the course pack in the first 10 weeks of the course. The biggest improvement, however, was the addition of a multi-parameter rubric, which subdivided (both for me and for the students) the different categories in which they would be assessed. This rubric will be discussed in the following section.
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Reflection on Student Work
In comparing student performance from Fall 2014 to Fall 2015, I found that there were too many variables to really assess how any one change affected the outcome. First of all, I changed the number of assignments to four, instead of three. This was done largely to make room in the schedule for the aforementioned writing pedagogy. Second, the assignments themselves were different. Of the four given in Fall 2014, only two were retained for Fall 2015, and one new assignment was added. The required length for all was reduced, from 250–350 words to 150–250 words.
Nevertheless, I thought that my writing pedagogy, and especially my new feedback mechanisms, would show a significant improvement. For example, one big change I made halfway through the Fall 2015 semester was providing audio feedback on students’ final drafts of these papers. In Fall 2016, I refined and improved this audio feedback by utilizing Blackboard’s VoiceThread feature. The students now not only heard my speaking voice reading parts of their paper, but would also be able to watch my cursor move over parts of the text, providing a multi-media feedback system.
I hoped that I might see improvement not only in terms of absolute scores between F2014 and F2015, but also in the level of improvement for an individual F2015 student over the course of the semester. While the data in Table 1a doesn’t show much improvement in overall mean scores from F2014 to F2015, the distribution data in Table 1b does provide evidence that my writing pedagogy did help individual students improve over the course of the semester in F2015. Note that in F2014 the grade distribution worsened over the course of the semester, whereas in F2015 it got better initially from WA1 to WA2 (but not WA3, a point to which I’ll return shortly).
The data in Table 2 do show a couple of things conclusively. The second paper (WA2) showed significant improvement from WA1 over the course of a single semester. The second paper is also the only paper in F2015 with a higher overall score than in F2014. An example of student work for WA2 in F2015 appears here (pdf), and the audio feedback (mp3) I provided for this paper can be heard here. A consistent problem in these papers is that students are providing “book report” style summaries, rather than arguing a position. You can hear in the audio feedback that I’m rather apologetic about calling the student out on this. In Fall 2016, I was more intentional about how I presented such feedback: honoring students for a style of writing that has, likely, earned them high praise in high school, while at the same time stating clearly what kind of writing is now expected from them in order to earn that same A.
The second thing that Table 2a shows conclusively is that WA3 reversed any improvement Fall 2015 students had made from WA1 to WA2. Three examples of student work for WA3 in F2015, and an analysis of their strengths and weaknesses, can be seen here (pdf). My initial assessment of the “WA3 problem” is that students did indeed continue to improve as writers, but that the assignment, newly created for Fall 2015, was substantially more difficult than WA1 or WA2. This assignment asks the students to analyze the form of a particularly thorny string quartet (Haydn, op. 76/2, I) and, ultimately, determine whether or not it’s an example of sonata form. I’m not all interested, in the end, about a “yes” or “no” right answer (scholars make arguments for both in this piece), but rather how effectively a student can argue for some answer. These three samples from WA3 reveal that Haydn’s string quartet is a difficult piece to analyze. Even at a point in the semester where students have completed their six-week unit on sonata form, the fact that this piece gives scholars difficulty suggests that perhaps it is too difficult for undergraduates to tackle.
To remedy this problem in Fall 2016, I scaffolded WA3 such that the students were exposed to this particular Haydn sonata throughout the semester. I made sure to present parts of this Haydn sonata as examples when we talked about period-themes in Week 2, transitions in Week 9, and development sections in Week 11. When it came time to write about the piece in Week 12, students were already familiar with the work and had spent considerable time discussing its component parts in small groups. With this familiarity, they were able to successfully argue that this piece either did, or did not, fit within standard models of sonata form. This author, for example, recognizes the overall formal shape despite some differences in key area and transformation of themes. Another author, by contrast, sees the lack of transition function and cadence following the secondary theme as anathema to traditional sonata form.
Table 3 shows that this scaffolding indeed improved the average individual student performance on WA3 (relative to WA2 and WA1) in Fall 2016. In Fall 2015, the median student’s score dropped by 3.5% on WA3, whereas in Fall 2016 the median student’s score rose by 1.5%. Another interesting data point in Fall 2016 is the median change between WA1 and WA2—there was none. I’d actually like to suggest that this is not a terrible thing. Tables 1a and 1b show that my Fall 2016 students actually began at a much higher level than Fall 2015. It could be that I just got better writers that semester. But, I’d like to think it was the revision workshop given by guest lecturer Aimee Wilson (Humanities), which I placed directly between the rough draft due date and the final version due date for WA1 in Fall 2016.
Rubric used to assess this student work
Having spent a lot of time designing this multi-parameter rubric, I’d like to explain its construction a little more. The combined paper score is just an average of their four scores shown in the four columns. I segregated the scores this way because, in Fall 2014, too many students were getting C, D, or even F scores because the quality of the written communication was so poor. The multi-parameter rubric helps to mitigate low performance in any one category. Another benefit of the multi-parameter rubric is that it helps to clarify students’ grades. They can see, for example, what score they earned in each of the four categories.
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My Perception of the Results
My perception of these changes in my approach to writing pedagogy has been positive. It seems that the students have a much clearer idea of what constitutes good writing, which I attribute to the grade-norming activity we do before the first assignment. Despite the fact that the grading data do not necessarily support this, I found that the students in Fall 2015 crafted better arguments in their writing than those in Fall 2014. However, I did not develop the rubric—which specifically calls for this sort of writing—until Fall 2015. The data in Table 1a do suggest overall improvement on all three papers in Fall 2016. In all cases but one, the averages were higher than both previous taken together.
It has dawned on me only lately that my original impetus for including writing in this course (teaching, rather than expecting) still needs to be applied more specifically to the process of learning how to create a good argument. I need to actively teach this specific skill, not just expect it. In the future, I’d like to include some assignments that ask students to:
- read good examples of argumentative scholarly writing,
- reflect on what exactly in the rhetoric made this effective,
- use the rubric to assess the efficacy of this writing style in their peers’ writing, and
- finally, be self-critical about their ability to create these sorts of arguments in their own writing.
Students’ Perception of the Writing Assignments
The students in Fall 2015 and Fall 2016 found the grade norming activity useful and enjoyable. We all know that undergraduates like competition. Having groups of three compete against each other to determine as accurately as possible the grade a certain paper earned last year proved useful. The debates that ensue are always spirited, and students are able to articulate clearly why they think a paper deserves a certain grade. This grade norming activity also results in the students’ increased familiarity with the rubric. In turn, I find that the students really understand why they earned the grade they did on a certain assignment. We have all had students complain of unfair grading, but their interaction with the rubric has all but ceased this
What I’ve Learned by Teaching MTHC 410 for 3 Years
Teaching this course every fall for the past three years has taught me a lot. Spending the past three years thinking about ways to revise the course has taught me even more. Having only taught at one-year gigs before arriving at KU in 2013, I find that immersion within a certain course that I teach every year is what leads to these teaching innovations. My Chair recently asked me, moving forward, what sorts of new courses I’d like to teach and, conversely, if there are any courses I’m currently teaching that I would like to cease. Sure, I have some I like more than others. But what I like more than the variety is the immersion. Ultimately, no matter much I plan and refine year to year, I find that so much depends on the individual students in the class each semester, and that I can only plan so much. Good teaching is, ultimately, about balancing preparation and spontaneity.
Moving Forward (F2017 and Beyond)
Having spent the better part of these three years in MTHC 410 thinking about the writing assignments, I believe I’ve settled on some practices and procedures. I will continue to collect specific data on those writing assignments, and I would love to have five years of individual rubric-component scores to analyze.
Moving forward, I hope to apply this same level of focus to the composition assignment the students complete over the course of the semester. Over the course of the semester in Fall 2015 and Fall 2016, students composed an entire first movement of a string quartet or piano sonata. There are five checkpoints along the way where I, and their fellow students, can track their progress. I am planning to use this assignment every year, but I would like to think more about ways to refine it. I’d like to see students do more to integrate their performance and/or improvisation within this composition assignment. For example, instead of only writing for string quartet or piano, what if I allowed them to write for any ensemble that could be formed from the students in our class? This way, we could perform all of them live and use those performances to inform the ways in which we refine and edit our compositions. Likewise, what if I had the students improvise several different themes, transitions, and codas, record those improvisations, and use those as a starting place for composing? This would probably yield more musical results than students just sitting down with pencil and paper to begin their compositions.
Finally, one of my goals moving forward in the coming years is to include music written by more diverse composers than Haydn, Mozart, and Beethoven. Moving into classical music written in the 19th and 20th centuries will necessarily include more music composed by women. Broadening the scope of the class to include popular music will also necessarily include people of color and will include music that foregrounds different sexual identities. Music written by “dead white dudes” is still the bread and butter of most graduate programs the students will find their way into, but this is changing, and I’d prefer my students to be on the forefront of this change.
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Click below for PDFs of all documents linked in this portfolio.
- Osborn portfolio
- MTHC 410 Syllabus, Fall 2016
- Writing assignment 2 description, Fall 2015
- Table 1a: Averages across section for individual writing assignments
- Table 1b: Grade distribution across section for individual writing assignments
- Writing assignment 2: Student work example, Fall 2015
- Rubric, Fall 2015
- Writing assignment 3: Student work examples and analysis, Fall 2015